The Puu (small cinder cone) Ka Luu O Ka '0'0 Taken from the rim of Haleakala Crater on...

I welcome your feedback.

My personal point of view tells me that the stone at the bottom to the right and the sky above the mountains should be cropped away, that will increase impact. After that it would be a evan greater shot. Regards.

Thank you for the suggestion. I like it better that way too.

I agree with cropping the stone but the sky gives me a reference that tells me the image is level.

Beautiful! We never got to Maui this time around, maybe next time! :)

Of all the image in your portfolio, this is the one that touched me the most. The colors and clouds are wonderful and the POV is excellent. I do agree with other comments regarding some cropping. Regards.

Now that is what I call a Photograph, Sweet :)

This is a very impressive image (6) - Congrats and I agree with the suggestion re the stone at the bottom right!

This is very scenic and dramatic.

 

Jim Phelps

Well, I'm definitely in the minority here, but I couldn't disagree more with the idea of cropping out that rock in the bottom right.  First of all, it lends interest to what would otherwise be just a large grassy slope.  If you crop from the bottom, you lose the interesting terrain of the rocky slope, and if you crop from the right in encroaches on the big rock too much.  I've been here and know what an amazing and even mystical place this is.  The expanse is impressive, so I also even like the bit of sky showing.  It gives a more accurate sense of 'place' and scale.  Anyway.....just my 2 cents.  I truly love this image, and it brings back memories of the wonderful morning I spent there.