GerrySiegel 868 Posted November 5, 2009 She is cute and the pose is charming. Only suggestion is that I might have rolled down the cuffs to reveal a little of her wrists and show the separation of same. The black sort of looks in the computer like a big sector without depth or contour. And het the eyes are very nice and the simple touch of lip color. Yes, the hair roots are showing. But that is the way of the world:-) I wish you all the best, Alex...gs Link to comment
kombizz 15 Posted November 6, 2009 A very beautiful capture of this young model with nice charming pose. Link to comment
defuite 0 Posted November 9, 2010 Hi Aleksandar,An excellent portrait! Good comp, exposure and focus!Keep up the good work!Gavin Link to comment
jgerecht 0 Posted November 27, 2010 I've got two comments/critiques:1) I'd crop the photo just below her hair, making it almost square. It can look much better when cropped like this. The large area of negative space does nothing for this composition. Eliminating it just makes the it a stronger photo.2) I wish her hair had been freshly dyed. The color goes beautifully with her skin. But the dark roots distract from her beauty.Overall, I love the composition and her face. She's beautiful and her eyes are incredible.I also wish there was a bit more of her hands in the photo, though I can certainly appreciate it as it is. I'd also like it a bit better if her hands hadn't been pressing against her chin, it looks a bit awkward. Link to comment
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