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Had a hard time with these 2- and contrast-any comments appreciated!

I've dabbled with this genre a bit and know that's it's hard to pull off an image that gets beyond what a couple can have done at at a Wallmart "studio." I rather like this, although it's "story" is no obvious ... I would like it clearer that they are in bed (perhaps itis in the higher resolution version -- that seems to be a pillow I see in the background. I rather like the ambiguous expression on his face. I'm sure, however, that you have additional images from the sequence that better suggest an emotional connection between the two of them.

I do indeed-have more pictures- I feel it shows to much emotion though-