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I'm interested in peoples' opinions on this photo; all constructive

critiques are welcome and appreciated. If you feel the need to give it

a 1/1 or some other low score that's fine; I'd just appreciate knowing

what you find that needs improvement.

 

Also, I apologize for posting this twice; I had posted it yesterday

with "Submit for critique only" checked by accident and I actually

want to see the numbers. If there's a way to change that after a photo

has been posted let me know!

 

Thanks,

-Pat-

Pat, if anything the rock at lower left may be a little overbearing. As for the rest I like it. I like the pose, exposure and color

very nice model and well done work ! best regards ! 6/6

Look like Uncomfortable in sitting. Otherwise Nice texture.

All the nit picking aside, this is fantastic. What a beautiful piece. Love the light, and line.

I have a hard time imagining a narrative for this image that is plausible. While it's technically excellent and each element is fine on it's own, I can't make up a reason for her being where she is, as she is. And her tan lines just make the scenario even less plausible (she obviously is a modern woman who is normally clothed in contemporary style). The setting isn't particularly evocative of any specific scenario, either. It could be a dwelling for a more primitive human archetype, or an emergency shelter for a stranded visitor or a den for a wild creature. But I don't get why she's lounging here in this semi blissed out state. Just coming down from a X trip while camping?

Maybe it's a failure of imagination on my part... t

(nice light that day, though, and I understand the compelling forces that were working on you at the moment. But I don't think it holds together.)