One more Sunset

Here is another sunset. What do you think? Thanks for response!

Please, please, please get rid of the two black beams in the border. They completely mess up the composition of this incredible picture. Because you have an excellent exposure here, especially with, what looks like, the rain crossing over into the lighter areas.

 

You have a great photograph, please fix the image.

Almost painterly in its magnificent drama. I might have been tempted to crop a small amount away from the bottom, but that's a small point. This is a terrific image.

Its very very attractive. The color is spectacular. I particularly like the very low horizon line. The one spoiler, which moves it down in rank for me, is that patch of of pale blue on the left. Other than that, I think its a fabulous image.

Fantastic capture! What are those light dots in the darkest foreground on the far left & right -car headlights? A little distracting. Love your portfolio!

Thanks!

Cameron, I didn't understand about black beams in the border... Where they are?

And those bright spots at the bottom are city lights. This is Salt Lake Valley and it's getting dark. I'll print it and will try to evaluate those then.

Thanks for critique!

 

Oh wow, looks like I was off base about the borders. Seems to be part of the picture. But what I meant still stands; I'm talking about the dark bands at the bottom and top of the picture. To me, the lack of detail in those dark areas detracts from the intensity of the image of the very colorful sunset. So I'd crop the darkness off the bottom and the top. Of course, that's just my personal opinion. Whatever works for you.