single photos Railway track

I am on Photo.net to learn, so any comment will be appreciated very

much.

A good photo.

I like those with a good graphical impact, which means the photographic plane is structured in a quite artistic manner. The simple elements, like lines, colors, lightness etc. produce a complete picture without necessarily having to refer to the things pictured.

For me this is a good and artistic composition. I like it.

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Well - the above was just a little text in Danish, now for the critic.

Firstly, I like the motive, and the weather fits the motive nicely. The ingredients fore a really god picture are present in the picture. Unfortunately I don't find this result that good, and there are two reasons fore that, firstly the contrast, secondly the crop.

The picture seems to be a bit "grey", the asphalt seems grey and the water seems grey. I think it would be even better id you added some contrast, which make the water more white and the asphalt darker. It would make the picture more "intense", and more "real"!

Secondly, I think you could make the picture better by cropping around 1 cm from the right side away. There is some sort of thing in the upper right corner. That's disturbing, because I think that the motive is about rain, rails and asphalt, nothing else. Therefore it would make the composition more "clear" if you crop that thing away. Anyway the crop will not affect the beautiful lines in the picture.

I hope you can use my critic, and I will comment some of your other pictures when I find something intelligent to say!

Have a good weekend!

PS: The famous Paris photographer Brassai also took a lot of good pictures of shapes in the streets, like a wet sidewalk that makes an "s" shape etc. Maybe you would find some of his work a inspiration to this kind of pictures!

Hey Lars,

I don't agree with Kristian's assessment. I think more contrast would cheapen the image, to contrived. I also like the dark spot in the upper right. It gives the image context. I know what I am looking at.

Paul