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This is a new model I'm working with.

I would try to crop out the verticle line (morter or something) on the left side of the frame. This is a good start, but the pose doesn't work for me. Give it another whirl. (A little more drama in the lighting would help I think too)

This image comes up small on my monitor - not enough detail. I think I would crop out the vertical line on the left though.

crop done. it does look better without that line.