Autumn's Slumber

Critique appreciated!

Jill, your name seems to keep on popping up on photos that I like. Another nice portrait.

just an idea for cropping. keep shooting

Looks very cosy. The friends back in the foreground is definitely too dominant. Nels' cropping above looks close although I think I would keep all of the head in the background in shot.

...average

Its a good shot, but unfortunately most of the image is of the back of whoever is in front of this girl.

 

I looked through your portfolio and you appear to be dedicated to working in this style and stick to the subject matter of portraiture. Its really excellent that you're doing this, as few people on this site commit like this. Just keep making photographs and you will grow.