Bird of Paradise

Thank you for your critique. Please tell me what you like, what you

don't like, what could be done better, what you would do to improve

the picture, etc. Thank you very much for your time and advice.

 

Vince Boston

I liked the color and focus. But I think that the background is distracting your flower. Try to cut it. I tried to do that in this link. Please see, comment and rate it too if you have some free time.

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2685088

The background is too busy, perhaps if the shot had been taken from a different angel. I also think it is too close as you cant see all of the flower. The first thing i would do is turn off (if you can)the date facility of the camera this just gets in the way and spoils your shot. It has good colours. Jim.