Two Lonely Girls

A candid shot of a beach scene. Please critique. Thank you.

Blag I like this one too - more space, fewer elements, and a wedge of a triangle as well. Compositionally it's a quieter image, but there's more of a story (or tension) in its brother.

I like this one. It feel like they are in peace...

Oooohhh. !!!

You have a wonderfully graphic stage here with a nice mood. Theother image with the intruder is not as strong for me. My mind likes the two girls alone better. Maybe it is a guy thing. TYhe 3 strong elements here are the 2 girls and the pier. The guy adds a fourth element and it is less striking to me.

this is a nice shot. congrats on so many fine new images,

Lee

Appealing photo. Perhaps they are content and not lonely. Of course you saw all the expressions that were not in this photo and I will concede that maybe they were lonely. I like the simple image here.

Miss you Blago - hope you're Ok ... (-;

 

Great shot btw ... !