"Casual Portrait" done in my home studio

Please comment on this casual portrait.

If I looked as fantastic as your model I think I should be extremely pleased with this portrait. Everything looks exceedingly well groomed, natural and lovely. Fine flat background. Sharp white eye highlights. Excellent job.

Agree with the above. I like the image.

 

Now if it were my image and I was looking for some constructive feedback - the far side of her face could stand a bit more light ... perhaps move the light more to the right of the camera or use a reflector. This may give a bit more of a shadow on the right side of her nose ... give a bit of depth to her features. She may also turn a bit more towards the camera so that we can see all of her far eye. Perhaps her hands are a bit awkward ... the bend in her wrist is a bit harsh.

I do like this shot, hiding the bottom half shows more of a sad facial expression and a lot of thought, in the whole, a different expression completely, very sultry too, nice shot

A fine portrait, soft tones (yeah, there it is NPH!!), nice pose, pretty girl. I agree with the second comment about her left eye, something wrong with it, may be the shadow or some kind of strange reflect...

Very nice pose & composition but I think the texture filtering of her forehead has been rather overdone. I'd suggest applying the filter to a duplicate layer and giving it 50-80% opacity so some of the original shows through. Any major blemishes can be masked by cloning beforehand.