philmorris 0 Posted November 3, 2001 If I looked as fantastic as your model I think I should be extremely pleased with this portrait. Everything looks exceedingly well groomed, natural and lovely. Fine flat background. Sharp white eye highlights. Excellent job. Link to comment
kelvin_chao 0 Posted November 3, 2001 Agree with the above. I like the image. Now if it were my image and I was looking for some constructive feedback - the far side of her face could stand a bit more light ... perhaps move the light more to the right of the camera or use a reflector. This may give a bit more of a shadow on the right side of her nose ... give a bit of depth to her features. She may also turn a bit more towards the camera so that we can see all of her far eye. Perhaps her hands are a bit awkward ... the bend in her wrist is a bit harsh. Link to comment
marc1 0 Posted November 8, 2001 I do like this shot, hiding the bottom half shows more of a sad facial expression and a lot of thought, in the whole, a different expression completely, very sultry too, nice shot Link to comment
nomade 1 Posted December 9, 2001 A fine portrait, soft tones (yeah, there it is NPH!!), nice pose, pretty girl. I agree with the second comment about her left eye, something wrong with it, may be the shadow or some kind of strange reflect... Link to comment
jonathancharlesphoto 4 Posted December 9, 2001 Very nice pose & composition but I think the texture filtering of her forehead has been rather overdone. I'd suggest applying the filter to a duplicate layer and giving it 50-80% opacity so some of the original shows through. Any major blemishes can be masked by cloning beforehand. Link to comment
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