Playing with my macro lens

Trying out a new lens. constructive critique would be apreciated

IMO the face of the watch needs to be seen here. Not sure if a polarizer would help in this situation. I like the comp and tonality.

john, your composition and exposure is very good. but i agree with Dave about the watch face. a polarizer will def help.

If you don't have a polarizer you can also place a peice of black paper over the part of the window that is directly reflection on the watch face itself, it takes a little time to get it positioned and to the right size but it works really well.

Thanks for the constructive coments. I will try again and see if a polorising filter helps.