Rose

Composition ruins what could have been an interesting shot, had it been composed in some way other than centered.

I'm not sure what the composition comment was about. A bit of minor cropping would help, but other than that, great eye!

Spari

I think Cedar is right , the composition does ruin.

The pose of the figure is interesting and worth takinjg the picture (I take it this is not a model). Dead centre like this, it makes the image static. If the girl were at the bottom of the frame (for example), it would make for a more dynamic image, the weight of the building hanging over the girl, and intensifying the feel of her pose. But it's a good photo, and I only hope I'll have the eye to see an opportunity like this when it arises.