She loves me... not.

Critiques welcome!

Wow Jason - people have been posting some pretty nice macros lately, but this one really leaps out at me. Lighting, focus, comp - all very well done.

Thanks Christopher, I'm glad you like it. I couldn't think of a title that made use of that wilted petal there....

Very neat and nice composition.

Good colors, Well DOF, Ok in focus, at all Excellent work.

great colors, incredibly clarity, wonderful contrast. this is a really excellent piece fo work. perhaps a little less negative space, crop a litle to the right? i say this cuz by way of title, i suggest "staring into the precipice" or "jump?" or something like that.

 

i've been doing some macros lately, be honored if you took a look and let me know what you think, good or bad, cuz its all good (feedback, that is).

 

ben

Much appreciated Ben, Majid, Aparajith. Ben, that's a good idea about the theme suggestion and the crop. I was approaching it like a buddy shot between the bud and the fly, but now I'm seeing the fly jumping from the high dive. I'll see if I have anything constructive to say about your shots; so far they're much better than mine, hah!

very impressive ! 7/7

Jason its a really good picture. Very well done.

As far as a title goes I was thinking of She loves me! She loves me not! She loves me! She loves me not! She Loves Me! Yippee!

 

 

DK.

 

 

Thanks David, I'm going to totally steal your idea!