Lost

I saw a lot of remarks like this is very beautiful, or nice, or very

cool. Please !!! Be very tough and also give me your sugestions about

compozition and what ever pops in your mind.

Very beautiful. It me lack can be the eyebrows... It is by far the best photograph of those which you show us. Continue!

 

 

 

Fain conceptul si lumina, as fi preferat fotografia la dimensiuni ceva mai mici, clonat putin firele de par din dreapta si era perfect!

I'm not seeing "cold sadness" here. It feels posed to me. I do like the composition and the use of a single light source illuminating the profile. The OOF wisps of hair coming into the bottom right of the frame a little distractng.

Mersi Razvan. Crezi ca ar arta mai bine daca ar fi patrata. Si de ce fire de par vb tu de sprancene sau de parul ei??? Am modificat un pic.

Thank you Laurie. I realy apreciate that you told me about the title. For me this is very important. How would you entitle it. You are right it is kind of rigid. The girl was at her first and last photo session. I will add more pictures from the series.

Her expression doesn't really say anything to me. I guess if I had to label it, I'd call it "indifferent", perhaps "drifting" (perhaps on her way to being lost :). Removing the wisps of hair helped a lot IMO. I look forward to seeing more from the series.

excellent use of focus and depth of field, I would never have thought about doing that (will now)!

Acum e mult mai buna.. variantele patrate nu prea sunt agreate in general la fotografii, insa aici eu zic ca merge bine asa.