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Nathan,

 

It evokes a good mood that is representive of India, but there is room for some improvement.

 

It has a bit of a washed out look, which I think is a result of the scanning. Try re-scanning it to see if it improves.

 

The woman's face is completely lost in the shadows. Without resorting to an elaborate multi-flash system, I'm not sure what you could do about this. Maybe try the shadow/highlight tool in PS CS(2).

 

The leaves in the foreground are somewhat distracting - they completely hide the man's hands.

 

Plenty of potential here, just needs a little more work/thought.

 

Hope this helps.

lemale

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Nice composition
n.a.t.h.a.n

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Thanks Craig..Appreciate ur comments..

 

I agree with scanning...if u see the prints, u might like it.

i want to show the girl face in darkness only b'se of her lifestyle...

but i value ur comments..

 

Donatas,

Appreciate ur comments

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Nathan,

 

I hadn't thought of purposely leaving the girls face shadowed. Now that concept certainly invokes a typical part of life for many Indian women. In that case - great thinking.

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