Saturday afternoon

pls critique for model pose and composition. Just starting back

into B&W developing after a long time off. I know the dprint could

use some help

Welcome back to analog! I just started learning to print in my own darkroom and am having a blast! So, understand that my critique is from the viewpoint of a newbie...(who gets dust on his negs too)...

I like the compostion, however the dof seems a little shallow; maybe by a stop. Nice casual pose, but she seems just a pinch out of focus...It could be my eyes, though. This might also look good square, with a little more tree...?

Keep that analog camera in your bag, whichever it is...