Janita pose

Well, I like the model and the pose.. and it really seems like you know what you're doing in the studio.

However, I think the lighting is very inapropriate for the model. She has a very big nose, and the light comming from the upper right emphasizes it with the shadow being dropped behind it.

Some fill on the left, and perhaps her tilting the head a little upwards would help a TON!

Hope this makes sense, and again - nice shot!