nude: silo0821

Comments appreciated.

I think that you're really onto something here with your concept. But, not to offend, it seems like a very uncomfortable image. From the frame work of the window to her pose. Also, it helps to blow out the detail outside the window a bit more. If you shot this at 1/30 second for example, next time try 1/8 or 1/4 to keep the silhoet detail while removing any distracting information in outside. Still a wonderful concept and I'd like to see you give it another try ... if you can convince her to get nude for you again :-)

Looks like a contorted store mannequin to me.

Doesn't work for me. I agree with the preceedings comments, the pose, the background and so on. May be if you can light some part of her body... I would keep on trying, may be you're on the way to a clever shot. ;-)