Portrait, Black and White, colored in photoshop

"Green Eyes", a black and white portrait tinted in photoshop.

Too much head tilt. Is she falling asleep?

The best advise I can give to you is that you must do something about what she is wearing. You have a good looking model and a good idea for an image but you must remember that a photographers job is not just to click the shutter, you need to be alert to hair, make up, clothing, light, posing, etc. it's your job, not hers, it looks like she is wraped in tin-foil, I'd actually like to see her topless ( which doen't mean that you have to show all the pink parts, just take it off the shoulder and crop in tighter ). maybe her head is tilted a little too much, her arm is cut off and is a little distracting ( tighter cropping will help that too ) but get her back in a play with it a bit. also as long as you're in photoshop you should re-touch out all but one of the catch lights in her eyes, always leave the one on the same side as the directon of you main light. your getting there but your not close enough. Good luck.

lovely portrait, this seems to be one of those shots that have a B/W label on it, i dont think it would have the same appeal in colour,your choice in tinting works wonderfuly. great artiste at work again

LORRAINE HERMOSA FOTO----

very soft.