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Well seen PT! Theme fit is great.

 

Technically it seems fairly well exposed, though the sky could be a bit brighter perhaps. In this shot high contract between shadows and sky/clouds would not bother me.

 

Esthetically I'm not sure. I think a crop top and bottom would help (get a more standard aspect ratio). Compositionally it's a very busy shot. But I don't see how to improve that; any further crop would destroy the whole.

 

Regards,

 

Tom

If I knew what does "SPearS" mean? Any help? Regards. Blago

A: Good photo, good choice of lighting and background, good choice of accompanying elements, good composition, with enough space on the left, I don't mind the building in the lower part it helps clarify the position of the sign.

C: and VRT: the phone line ads interest to the photo beyond the S theme, which is there

has the image interest beyond PT and the assignment?:yes

I wonder why would anyone request for help with a pear? is this some kind of night club?

oh, and yes I agree that is a bit busy.

Good eye PT. My guess is that this is some sort of a fruit store :). I like it and don't think that this is busy. There is a lot going on almost in layered manner. I like it.

PT, you've spotted a good opportunity and made the most of it. Exposure is fine and composition too, IMO. The use of silhouette has prevented it from being too busy. The wires provide the roof-top context, and without them it wouldn't be so interesting.

 

I'm guessing S-pear-S, or spares? A spare part dealer or a fruit seller?

 

In an ideal world I'd prefer the puffy white cloud to fill the background behind the lettering, or a thunder bolt to strike the pear stem (SOS) ... but as I said before, I think you've made the most of it. No obvious improvements spring to mind.

The sign is from a pear warehouse-southern oregon sales. Originally, PT was just shooting the sign but noticed the powerlines and thought it added to the shot. The rumbling in clouds added to the sos from pt's point of view. would have been nice to have a better sky.

I agree that this would look much more better with a better sky, or with some more "industrial" smoke. The theme fit is ok I guess but after spending a couple of seconds, there is not much that hold my attention. Great idea to decide to include the wires however.