My girl

All comments welcome

I really like the lighting in your picture. It yields smooth tone transitions. And your girl is not overly "say cheese". :-) Nice and natural. Not chopping off the top of her head in the picture would be the main improvement IMHO. Was that intentional?

I like a lot overall impact - cute model, VERY natural, good lighting. But agree with #1 - some improvements are necessary...

Thanks Michael and Martynas. Cropping the head was not intentional, it was a snap shot taken with my 70-200 VR (in the 200 end), not much time to compose!

She is a cutey, and the look is very natural. The crop doesn't bother me, in that I think it adds to the natural, unposed feel of the shot. It does seem it could be a bit sharper. Still, a keeper for sure!