Yellow Backpack

This is my first foray into long exposures. I thought it was

fortuitous how the girl with the yellow backpack stayed still for the

4 seconds or so that the shutter was open. Thoughts?

I like it. The yellow backpack definitely adds to it's originality. Verry fortuitus. I'm not sure I like the crop or the angle too much. Is this a crop, or did you shoot it at this angle? I would like it slightly more level, and would rather her left foot wasn't cut off.

I shot it at this angle, but not because I wanted to; I didn't have a tripod with me and the only way I could hold the camera steady was to place it on the angled newspaper box next to me. I agree -- I also wish the foot weren't cut off. Perhaps it's worth going back and staging something...

 

Thanks for your comment!