Nutter Flutterby 2

Thanks for looking.

Not sure what you're trying to do. It could be intentional or it could be a dreadful failure. Since you've put it here I guess you would say the former, I tend to the latter. It seems to me too soft and to have a colour cast. Even if it is intentional I would crop out the intrusions at the bottom right. 2/4

I was beginning to wonder if anyone here would honestly criticize anything any more. You are were right the first time. I actually cropped the right side to that point and left it that way so the upper right side would show the stem arching up just a little more. I didn't think the bottom right would ruin it but..., you were right again. A dismal failure. The picture was on an old scanned film CD and I did a quickie edit on MS Office Picture Editor. It needed some lightening also. Thanks for an honest, to the point and helpful critique. Very refreshing these days.

What a relief. I was on a roll of a few critial reviews yesterday, and I am relieved that I hit the mark on at least this one. I certainly try to be honest (though hopefully tactful) and I am please to be taken the way I mean to be taken.

Like this with a square crop. Poetic...just right.