Jaelle

I just noticed the person peering in the back window. The more I look at this picture, the more I see. Great shot!

I love the frame within a frame...

I know how an artist hates others telling them "try this" but I'd suggest a cropping to remove the pipe and manipulating the other person out of the far window...

 

Keep the wall heavy to the left and top...looks like she's trying to keep it from falling in on her...especially with that worried look.

 

IMHO

 

Well, I don't mind suggestions...but surely you see that if I did as you say, it would be a whole different picture. Cropping out the pipe is a possibility, but the other person's face, and Jaelle's expression, are essential elements of what this picture is saying to me. They create tension and make this something other than a simple portrait. Thats my opinion, anyway. But, as I said, I am also interested in other people's as well...

For the first couple of seconds looking at the picture I thought it was interesting but nothing as captivating as many of your others.

 

Then I had this flash of panic as I realised someone was watching her. Now I can't get the picture out of my head.

 

I still prefer a lot of your other work, but this image has real impact.