fell in love with a girl...

what do you think?

Excellent colors! The girl looks nice too, but a bit faded perhaps :-)

the picture of the girl is under a glass table, therefore the sightly faded apperance...

 

 

thanks jon!

Unfortunetly you missed your focus.Focus on lime could look better.

Unfortunetly you missed your focus.Focus on lime could look better.

I deliberatly chose not to focus on the lime...im my opinion that would have been a destructive factor to my initial idea...sorry, i disagree...:-)

I'm taking my words back. I haven't seen girls at the left side .. on preview it works better then on big one. The sight sliding away. Sorry, but it's my filling...

I really like what you have done with this photograph. I dont mind you not focussing on the lemon, I think it gives the picture this soft dreamy feel. I love the feel of the picture!

sould definitely increase DOF :p Did you use a polarizer to reduce light reflection and increase the girl visibility?

I feel no need to increase the depth up field, whereas this picture/feel is has nothing to do with the main centre of attention.

 

The lemon, is situated on a glass table, with the light reflecting from the windows in my "cathederal"celing studio appartment.

 

For this shot i used a Bronica 80mm, with close-up-filter.

 

personally this shot would not have been "anything" if the entire picture had been in focus.

 

Thanks for all the comments

 

marius

It was very easy to rate: originality is there and the color is wonderful. Nothing more to say! :))

So you mean the interesting part of the photo is the spring, the blow out and the shadow? O:-) To be honest with you I think you were close to have a great picture and even now it looks appealing.

I mean that , being able to the the "back" of the spiral, the girl sligthly faded underneath, the off focus areas of the "border", engage in further meanings, with different layers of interpretation...:-)

 

marius