my brother and a photograph by Griffiths

please tell me if you think this kind of portrait works. (for all the

pj fans out there its a griffiths vietnam pic)

I imagine this signifies the Vietnam Vet. Good concept. I think we can do without the bright spots near his neck. (If you do not have permission from Griffiths to do this, this is a copyright infringment, which is wrong, and could lead to serious problems)