The Steps...

Comments or ratings much appreciated.

I think you needed more light, 5/6

Hello Derek.

 

Which one is the groom?

 

A nice, and unusual wedding photograph. The lighting conditions were not entirely favourable, and this is highlighted most on the face of the chap on the right, which looks a little under-exposed.

 

Regards, Nick.

it was a good idea.

Indeed!

I very much enjoy the composition. It is inviting and unique. My only thought (and it may just be my monitor) is that it's not metered correctly for thier faces. Oh, one more thing, the street light coming out of the side of the maid of honor's head is distracting.

I would suggest metering for the background and filling the forground with you flash. Good idea, however, exposure could be better.

get the subjects a bit closer and turn the angle of the camera- this pic will work better that way

Thanks for all of your interesting and helpful comments. Exposure is something I really need to focus on in future. Thanks again...

A really bad shot? Why? notice the light ploes coming out of the heads. Lack of fill flash. Seapration between subjects excessive, overall poor composition and posing.

maybe you have found your calling derek. not bad at all, couldn't do better myself haha keep up the good work mate!!