Wine Glass and Bottle in low light

I was working on getting a low light atmosphere but at the same time

I wanted the shadow of the glass to remain vivid, I seem to of

obtained that but what I want is feedback on howthe image comes

across to others.

Here's my take: move the glass forward and left, change your angle of view up and right, and closer. open up to f8 or 5.6. cast the rim in sharp focus. I'd upload a sketch for you if I could. You need to fill your frame, dynamically. Bringing the glass to the left and closer casts the shadow across the frame, the bottle behind as an approaching subject. Hope that made sense.