deplin 0 Posted April 2, 2005 This is my first posting for a still life photograph. If you give me a low rating at least have the decency to explain so I can improve. Dave Link to comment
giuseppe_miriello1 0 Posted April 2, 2005 David, this is a nice attemp, there are many positive points and some defects. I like the perspective, the use of dof to help perspective, the tones. The light however is a bit confusing, there is a nice backlight that gives hotspots, but the foreground glass could be rendered better. Also the foreground glass is tilted on the right (and the second glass too)... Technically it is a good picture, probably next time you should focus to give a message, better if it is very original, becouse you have already a good techinique. regards. g. Link to comment
deplin 0 Posted April 2, 2005 Thank you very much for your critique, much appreciated. I am looking forward to doing more. Link to comment
pjmeade 12 Posted April 3, 2005 David, this is pretty good. I like the way you have presented the glasses, but it's a little uneven. The dark background is good but the lighting of the glasses themselves also seems a little uneven. I found it pretty difficult to photograph crystal myself. http://www.photo.net/photodb/folder?folder_id=480749 Best wishes. P Link to comment
deplin 0 Posted April 3, 2005 Thank you for your comment. The crystal was shot outside on an old cedar split rail fence with available light, no fill flash, maybe next time I will try the 580ex for fill or maybe even a relector. I like your crystal shots. Dave Link to comment
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