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Ok, the subject isn't a serious one, but I am trying to express a

serious feeling with this shot. I dodged the eye in the darkroom to

bring it out, and over developed my film to achieve increased

contrast. I was told by one of the local commercial photographers

that my images are flat. Any suggestions? Comments? Anything

would be appreciated, comments with ALL ratings as well.

well i know you wanted to make the eye stand out but i think its a little over done.but i like the pose