amorteguy 0 Posted March 25, 2005 Very nice composition and character study. I was wondering if the hawk was a good choice for digital enhancement. In my opinion it detracts somewhat from an otherwise very traditional and pleasing composition. If you like the hawk in the composition, I would have placed it a more natural position. The upward flight looks too unrealistic. Also, to make it appear more realistic, gausian blur the hawk so it appears at the same degree of softness wich would result from the overall depth of field. All that said, I like it and I encourage your continued creativity. Link to comment
awais 0 Posted March 25, 2005 Thanks for yours comments, You are right, I will Edit as you suggest, I am learning here at PN and improving my photography, Thanks again. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted March 26, 2005 Nice composition Mujahid, I think that it is rich as is , and the bird IMO does not add to the composition Pnina Link to comment
Tuhin 2 Posted March 28, 2005 The bird is too significant and since the man is not looking towards the sea/bird , it has no significance . You could avoid the bird or place it in a more distant sky in a more balanced manner . Presently the bird looks unbalanced ( seems to be falling over ) and is disturbing . Nevertheless , the picture is ethnic and looking forward to seeing more such images from you .. Link to comment
awais 0 Posted March 28, 2005 Thanks for yours comments, You are right, The bird is distracting, I will improve this image next time, You are welcome my friend. Link to comment
cherlyn 1 Posted March 29, 2005 A great composition of portrait of strong character & colours. Link to comment
bolti_ankheen 0 Posted March 29, 2005 Great Job Mujahid bhai. sorry for late i just saw your uploads. Regards Link to comment
shami 0 Posted March 31, 2005 i think you have caught the person at right time and on right place.... well done...7/7 Link to comment
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