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I'd appreciate your comments and rates. Thanks!!

Dear Susan, I am intrigued by this picture, I find the set up very aesthetic but the overall picture doesn't quiet work for me, maybe a bit too much exposed on the models specially lower left one on the chest and a lot of dark at the top of the picture. Great shot nevertheless, maybe just a bit of cropping and a play with the lights...

Hope I'm not being offensive but couldn't help trying this...

No offense at all. On the contrary, I feel grateful for your suggestion. You're probably right.. I'm still thinking about it... I didn't want to crop this picture to maintain the darkness, but maybe the dark on the top part is too big.. Thank you so much. Best regards!

Another great composition from this series!

 

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Regards, Nick.

Susan - another impressive image - strong style and great impact - well done - I couldn't improve it 7/7

Esta es la que mas me convence de todas. Menos la sombra de la cara sobre una de ellas , el resto lo veo bien. Ten en cuenta, que no conozco lo que quieres representar ni mostrar... si lo importante es mostrar la ropa... mostrar una imagen... simplemente te digo lo que veo. Como siempre IMHO sobre mis comments escritos.

I have said it before... I think this serie rocks! tou are great!

One of these gals in the foreground might have helped.

Thank you so much for your rates and for stopping by.. Thanks!!