calendar shoot

Critiques/comments, thanks.

Excellent Photo, I tried to give you a 7/7 rating but there was an error in processing rating. So the highest it will let me do is 6/6.

It looks like it has too much of a ghosting affect. Just something that bothers me

I think cropping the top would REALLY make this photo

Paul, I think you might be right. Thanks for the advice, I'm going to give it a try. check it out, what do you think?

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3209882

I think you really nailed the lighting on this, and the angle is great!

 

Looking over all the calendar shots and their comments, I'd say this one needs improvement in much the same way the industrial background one (the crane) does, in that you've got a ceiling light running straight through her head.

 

I know I've got a lot of nature shots posted and it's pretty obvious of your feelings on that and the photographers that leave remarks, but I'm really just trying to be honest.

 

The green van one works very well too, as does the Mercedes shots and the brick background, which I liked.