kit 0 Posted March 14, 2005 Really nice use of lighting here. the curve of reflected light on the vase carries on the curve of the flower in a natural way (with an almost natural geometric progression). Don't know if that was intentional but it really works. Link to comment
photoriot 16 Posted March 15, 2005 Very elegant and original. Tension, balance, composition and color. Link to comment
focus mankind 0 Posted March 15, 2005 I really like it - nice work. Did you try to cut a bit of the black on the top to make (panorama 2:4)? Just as an idea. Link to comment
michaelhills 0 Posted March 18, 2005 Wow, Janet. The beautiful simplicity of this composition just blows me away. Lovely form. The lighting on the flower appears to be spot on. However, do feel that the highlight on the vase is a little bright and detracts from the overall image. As the previous comment stated, it might be a good idea to try a greater landscape format to enhance the horizontal flow of the stem etc. The bottom left is a little distracting as well as I can see the folds in the bacdrop sheet. Overall, very well done indeed. M Link to comment
michaelhills 0 Posted March 18, 2005 Now, Janet, hope you don't mind me tweaking your work but I wanted to see what it would be like for your composition to focus on the form without the colours. Personally, I find this lends a different interpretation to the composition - not better or worse, just different. What do you think? M Link to comment
janetlee 0 Posted March 18, 2005 I appreciate you all taking the time to comment on my image. You all had great input. No, Michael, I don't mind your tweaking at all. I like your version. I tried that one and many others before deciding on this one. Gotta love Photoshop! :-) Link to comment
dougbraz 0 Posted November 22, 2005 What a lovely delicate (Graceful) curve. Superb lighting! Link to comment
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