basil g 0 Posted March 13, 2005 Welcome to peek into my "Fancy" folder. Thank you for any critique and comments Link to comment
dusan l 0 Posted March 13, 2005 Fantastic shot....and funny , nice trick...I like this type of cofee Link to comment
root 0 Posted March 14, 2005 Clever idea, well lit, and the shoes are a nice touch, but her pose and expression seem rather plastic. I'd also crop 20% off the left side to get rid of the brightest area and cut off handle, and to put her a bit more off center looking into the picture space. Link to comment
basil g 0 Posted March 14, 2005 >...her pose and expression seem rather plastic. You know, the girl was sitting quite comfortably and reflecting of her own smth. It's a pity you had the impression of plactic :(( >I'd also crop 20% off the left side to get rid of >the brightest area and cut off handle, and to put >her a bit more off center looking into the >picture space. Agree with you by 90% :)) Perhaps I'll do it before printing. Thank you. The reason why I didn't make the crop - was to balance the darker parts of the image. Link to comment
root 0 Posted March 15, 2005 I showed this to my wife, and she offered the 'plastic' description. I think the straight ahead gaze and head position which I had noticed might have been improved, although I'm no portrait expert. Link to comment
paul vasarab 0 Posted March 21, 2005 Very nice composition! I agree with previous comment. I would also crop out some portion of the left and center her more. Also, I dont know if you tried this, but see if its possible to put her reflection on the tea pot. Just food for thought. I really enjoyed this and thought this is one of the most creative compositions on this whole site! Link to comment
basil g 0 Posted March 21, 2005 Thank you Paul for good idea - frankly speaking, I haven't thought of a reflection in a tea-pot. Link to comment
michaelx 0 Posted March 24, 2005 A lot of effort but Eye contact would have made this one sizzle. Link to comment
beno_t_marchal 0 Posted March 31, 2005 Good idea, I like it. Technically it could be stronger (the quality of the light on her is different from the light on the teaware and she does not show in the cups shadow) but I'm willing to forget these for the... charming idea. 7/7 Link to comment
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