jayme 0 Posted March 9, 2005 Jarod- the composition is super. I love the way her arms are positioned and the vignetting is very nice. The only thing I might change would be the tonal range. It looks like there is too much middle gray, not enough light & shadow. I played to show you what I mean. The shadow on her face was difficult, but I used a layer mask in curves and slightly erased to return the shadow lighter. Of course this is just my opininon. You are doing beautifully, keep up the quest! Link to comment
jayme 0 Posted March 9, 2005 Jarod- here's another one where adjusted the Selective color in PS. I left the gey alone, made the white, white and darkened the black. I also dodged the shadow on her face a little. Link to comment
jared_b. 0 Posted March 9, 2005 Hey Everyone ! Please let me know what you think! Also, PLEASE VIEW LARGER :) All comments are appreciated Link to comment
michaelg 0 Posted March 9, 2005 Hi Jared, i like the photograph, but maybe a less fade ? Link to comment
clarissa_palmer 0 Posted March 10, 2005 Again this is Tiffany Neil and the girl in the pic is my BEAUTIFUL neice. I wouldnt change a thing about the picture. She looks like an angel. I love being able to get on here and look at her. It puts a smile on my face just seeing her. Keep up the good work. P.S. I think u should add more of her and some of her brother too! :) Link to comment
jared_b. 0 Posted March 10, 2005 I really appreciate everones comments. Thanks for the critiques ! Link to comment
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