Summer Fruit

Summer fruit

I am salivating, but the color of the image is too cold. I'd warm it up a bit and give more saturation to the greens--the leaves are almost white. The white space on the top right is distracting. Maybe a tighter crop would help.

 

Best luck.

Thanks for those constructive comments. In hindsight I should have perhaps removed the leaves and yes you are correct about the white space in the back. Making things look warmer is a new idea for me and a worthwhile one to keep in mind.

Hi Silvia! Looks really tasty. Did you see the manipulated version of my strawberries? It was better than the original. How about this? I am trying to learn.

Thanks Kennet. Yes I did see the manipulated version of your tasty berries. The closer crop and richer colour did enhance it a little. What you did to Summer Fruit is also an improvement. I think that having the leaves a rich dark green would also help. Thanks for taking the trouble to think of a way in enhancing the photo. That is what I think this site is all about...a way of helping each other get better results for the effort.

Whew!! Now it's time for me to sit down and enjoy these extremely inviting & delicious fruits! Thanx Silvia :)

Hi Silvia, fine arrangement and choice of colours (and fruit). Good clear and crisp image. I would perhaps experiment with a few other arrangements - with and without the green at the front.