Slit

Composition around a slit and some wet figures passing through it.

Your comments are more than welcome!

I really like this shot, though i feel the composition slightly static for the dynamic theme. I propose a more risky cropping with a little more contrast.

 

The figures are fantastic in this photo, not melting together, each having a different character despite the detailless representation.

 

Moreover i checked the meaning of "slit" in the sztaki szotar :)

 

Regards,

Pabo

Thanks Pabo. I also though about cropping the top. The contrast however is something that's too strong on your version, in my oppinion; details in the pavement and the wall are getting lost. Could be a difference between our monitors too:)