eric-v 0 Posted February 23, 2005 but the horizon line is very tilted and the foreground too empty. A closer shot to the water line would have given a stronger perspective. Link to comment
bobarcher 0 Posted February 23, 2005 I'm leaning to the left to stop falling over..please correct the horizon and resubmit. Link to comment
ellis_davison 0 Posted February 25, 2005 This is the sort of picture that brings me to the back of the pack from time to time. It could easily be in "Blind Spot" or a New York gallery without causing comment. The horizon is tilted and, if straightened, would probably bisect the frame: both violations of conventional composition wisdom. But there is a sense of the form, texture and rhythm of the landscape that is difficult to catch in two dimensions. A fine picture, but one that is not likely to get good marks in this venue. Link to comment
palomaramirez 0 Posted March 2, 2005 A mi me gusta que el horizonte este tan caido.....quizas lo hubiera exagerado mas....... Las manchitas del agua....habria que haberlas quitado....... Buena textura de la arena......... Un beso Link to comment
tatiana_oller 0 Posted March 3, 2005 las manchas q dices son las q estan en la arena? son piedras.bueno el horizonte se q esta torcido,pero lo mas me interesba era ver el paisaje pero sobre todo el brillo de la arena q tiene purpurina.gracias Link to comment
alberto.conde 0 Posted March 5, 2005 Infringe todas las reglas... estoy dispuesto a aceptarlo... pero, aún así, no veo la intención. Paloma tiene razón, puestos a ello, infríngelas del todo...!! Link to comment
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