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I like the light gradients and how the straight lines and right angles of the metal pieces are seen first and right after that the viewer sees the random, squiggly marks....excellent.

The "Sense of light" really sets a mood in this image. Very well done. and nice composing also.

 

Ryan McIntosh

I just looked through your portfolio.I love the sense depth and dimesion to your work.WiLL

The composition and light create a magical atmosphere. Thanks...

Thanks for any comments!

You did a good job with lighting the edges like this. Great to look at - though I'd prefer a more abstract approach which might be achieved by cropping out far left (shadows) and right (writing.)

Nice work.

Thanks for the comments everybody, I very much appreciate the feedback.

 

Seven, thanks for the criticism. Somewhere, I got the idea that a photographer shoots for full-frame compositions, and I sometimes forget that it's ok to do so. Cropping is a tool I need to get more comfortable with, especially since I've been shooting with one lens. almost exlusively, for six or seven years now. One lens can't do it all, every time. So, I'll try to post a revised and cropped image here....

Great lighting and effective composition. Such rich shadows and subtle detail.

Nathan - haven't seen this for a while : I like the attachment too - difficult to get one's head round which is the challenge I enjoy. Cheers.