calendar shoot

Critiques/Comments please, thanks.

Seems a little soft. The car, to me, seems sharper than the model. I also wish the shot showed all of the car. Would it have worked as a horizontal? The brickwork in the upper left corner seems distracting as well. There seems to be a slight yellow halo around the model and the back of the car. I kind of like it, though it might be a bit too yellow.

I should have sent the file larger, it isn't soft. If the whole car was in the model would be too small. If it was horizontal the model would be too small, that is unless I was planning to make this fit on the back of a bus. And I like the yellow brick, it breaks up the monontiny of the background. Too yellow? good, I was going for a x-process look. I guess everything you don't like about this photo is everything I like about it!! lol. Thanks for the critique.

Hmmm. Which one to choose.

 

I would have to go with the model. Very cute.

 

Nice photo. I like the yellow brick.

I find the model the right size and the car. Both looks in sharp focus on my screen. and the background brings out the model and car with out your eyes looking to much at the back.

I like the shot also, but I agree with Elwin. I think what he meant was not the yellow brick in the upper left, but the discolored outline around the car and model. Personally, I'd like to see some shots of the model without the car, lol!

colors are great, blue eyes, blue car, bluerocks, imposing! i would crop a bit from all sides especially the top but great! good for an advertisement

Thanks for the critiques guys, I wish that more people would let me know what they think is wrong with this shot, I happen to like it a lot.