Lauren

I'm just getting started shooting portaits with my new mono lights. I

would appreciate any constructive critisism that can be offered. I

have cropped this image and done a very small amount of clean up in

PS. Other than that it has not been enhanced.

A little fill light to lighten the shadow on the left side of her nose and to bring out her hair on the left side would be better. I find the brick wall distracting. It probably would have been OK if there was less depth of field and the bricks were much more out of focus. I do like her pose and expression.

Less DOF, a tighter crop wud do u a lot of good...Very beautiful model, u r lucky. practise more pls.