"Desolation" Shot in a burnt out fish and chip shop. I was working with the model with my kids playing in the background and I decided to include them in a few shots.The background is totally blown

This was shot in a burnt out fish-and-chips shop. I was working with

the model with my kids playing in the background when I decided to

include them in a few shots.

The background is totally washed out but I like it because it gives

the photo an "empty" feel - what do you think?

Please comment because I really welcome feedback to improve.

Thanks

David

Very original pic. Not sure I like the aggressive amount of grain, but it does seem to work. Looks like it was taken in the sixties after a riot or something. Good stuff. 5/6

Michael.