A Queen's Grave

Maybe I should've moved the focus more to the quenn's face instead of

to the angel on the right?

I think the focus is best where it is. Your eye ends up going to the angels face then down .... If the queen's face was in focus then I think it would be less dynamic. Would perhaps be interesting in b&w.

I like the warm brown colors better. But judge for yourself, i attached the b&w version (some corrections on the contrast had to be done).