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Overall, I like the composition and coloring. A couple of tweaks would make it better in my opinion. First, I think the face is a bit blown out. Second, I think you should totally burn in the top edge so that the black goes all the way around the frame. With the arm/hand up on the top edge, it kind of leaves a hole which is distracting. Other than that, looks good.

I agree with Scot. The upper torso also appears burnt, but not as badly as the face. Very good shot overall.

 

I think I am just adding to the other two commentsgreat image, but perhaps a little work on the face would make it a better image!

Love the tones you have captured. I think you have included just enough detail in your model's features. It would have been interesting if you could have caught some light on the model's right arm as well as her left to create a frame for her face.

I love the forms and textures in this, and the harsh lighting and abstract-ish quality.