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Memorial Flower

danieljbeck

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Canon AV-1, B/W iso 200. Taken at a memorial for the Parisians deported to Nazi concentration camps during the 2nd World War, on the island in the middle of the Seine

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danieljbeck

What do you think? Should I 'remove' the white dot just above the flower? Does it distract

the eye. I am a bit reluctant to doctor it. Thanks! DB

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danieljbeck

I have removed the white circle of light just behing the flower because I was not sure whether it was distracting the eye. Is this better or worse? What does the eye fall on now? Thanks for the ratings and comments, DB

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thomas_breazeale1
Daniel,I think that yes,this is a stronger image.Removing any distractions from the main subject matter will do nothing but help keep the eyes focused where they belong.I like your perspective here,the converging lines are dramatic but I am not sure about the DOF..whether this image would work better focused throughout the entire frame or not.This shot reminds me a lot of an image I took of a memorial flower while visiting Auschwitz.
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