Chloe & Friend

Great Job capturing the expressions on their faces at that exact moment. I've noticed photographs of children work out much better when slightly softer, not so crisp.

good light, girl on left looks too posed

Very sweet shot. It shows a lot of the girls personality. I like that they aren't looking at the camera, but are looking in the same direction with such distinctly different looks.

 

The blonds left side of the hair is a tad burned out. Also the sidewalk that is in the upper left side detracts from the brunnette. It seems to be pushing her down.

cute kids. The image could be a little darker and a little more contrasty. It's cool how they're both looking off the frame at something.

Very nice candid-you did an excellent job of getting close without making the girls self-conscious (or curious) of your camera! I want to look over my shoulder to see what they're looking at with such interest.

Cute kids. Can't go wrong with that!