kit 0 Posted January 14, 2005 Out on Lake Fewa, Nepal. Opinions and improvements in overall composition appreciated, I know it is not as sharp as it could be but was taken on a digital camcorder... its the composition I want critique on. please leave message if you make a rating. thank you Link to comment
s._levine 0 Posted January 14, 2005 I like the overall feeling of the shot: the haze in the background, the extended sense of depth supplied by the superwide lens. If I were you, i'd crop it as not to place the boat right in the center. Move it to one side or that other. I'd also crop a tiny bit in the foreground, which may be a bit distracting. Link to comment
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